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Read the poem “Bailar” to students. Generate a list of unusual things the students notice about the poem, in both English and Spanish. Go over some of the Spanish lines so that all students are aware of the unusual traits the poem is addressing.
Introduce the idea of personification. (When an object has traits or begins to behave as if a person would.)
Discuss the various forms of personification in the poem.
“The camino morning sits down.”
“El mundo tiembla”
“The sunshine peeks under the leaves”
“The camino morning sighs.”
Ask studentes to divide their paper into three columns. In the first column have them write down a list of ten objects (explain that these objects are nouns) that they see every day. Here are ten examples:
Then in the second column ask them to come up with several verbs. (Give the definition if needed)
In the last column have them come up with adverbs. (Give definition)
Write a collaborative poem on the board together. Have them chose an object from the first category and then an object from each of the other categories. The object can do whatever it wants and they can use any of the words from the other two columns, but the object needs to take on human characteristics. By the end of the poem we should really believe that the desk is walking around and talking to people.
You could demonstrate this by drawing arrows from one thing in one column to another thing in the next, this way students will have a way to visually follow along. Construct your line based on what they’ve picked out. Start them out with the first line and then see if they can continue the lines. Below are some first lines you can use:
1) The desk twirls easily in the middle of the classroom.
2) The bed steps carefully over the sleeping people.
3) The toothbrush walks softly over my big teeth.
After the collaborative poem, have students chose one object that they will write about in all of their lines. Have students write at least ten lines or sentences.
You can give them the columns that are attached to this lesson plan to work from as well. It might be helpful for them to have it in front of them so they can draw their own arrows and see the combinations on a piece of paper.
Once students are done writing their poems or paragraphs have them draw their objects.
• Share student work with the class.
The toothbrush is tickling himself on Mt. Lemmon
The toothbrush sang quickly to the cavities
The toothbrush saw a toilet singing Old McDonald
The toothbrush heard an eagle flying in the desert
The toothbrush was talking Chinese in France
The toothbrush slowly screamed when he saw the toothpaste going on him
The toothbrush bailó el merengue en la noche loquito
The toothbrush dijo buenas noches to la luz
The toothbrush ganó todo los juegos
The toothbrush abrió los ojos en la mañana y dijo buenos días to the mirror
The toothbrush and the floss skipped juntos afuera locos en la mañana
-Alexia Espinoza, 4th grade
The Pencil and Desk
The pencil took me to Mars and danced the salsa
El lápiz me llevó a Mars y bailó la salsa
I sit on the desk and while the pencil was dancing the desk took me to the moon
Me senté en la mesa y cuando el lápiz estaba bailando la mesa me llevó a la luna
-Nahomy Assmar, 4th grade
My bed turns red it dances and twirls
As it walks brightly into the light it acts like a little girl
It accidentally told me a lie and it felt guilty when I found out
As it told me softly I am tired
I put it to sleep and walked away quietly
One minute later I came back and again the bed twirled brightly
-Alex Saiz, 4th grade